はじめまして。私は シュールです。ちゅうごくからきました。
きょう にほんごをばんきょうします、にほんがとても好きですから。はじまりのみち と プラチナデータ です。はじまりのみち は かぞく について 映画ですか、プラチナデータ は フィクション映画です。
そして、が好きです。先週 二つ映画をみました。
それから、ピアノが得意です、 音楽が好きですから。
どうぞよろしくお願いします。
きょう にほんごをばんきょうします、にほんがとても好きですから。はじまりのみち と プラチナデータ です。はじまりのみち は かぞく について 映画ですか、プラチナデータ は フィクション映画です。
そして、が好きです。先週 二つ映画をみました。
それから、ピアノが得意です、 音楽が好きですから。
どうぞよろしくお願いします。
Hi. My name is Atsushi Yoshida. I’m 19 years old.
ReplyDeleteI’m a student of Ritsumeikan University. I live in Kyoto.
よろしくお願いします
I normally don’t watch movies, but I have read Platinum Date before in book.
I can’t play any instrument, but I like listening to piano and violin.
Hi, sorry for the late reply. I didn't know you are real person after my instructor sent me the email. よろしくお願いします.
DeletePlantinum Date is an interesting movie (excerpt it is some kind of too long). I think Japanese movie directors are really good at depicting details, which as a result give audiences a real sense of the plot.
Are you interested in any Japanese pop singer or group?
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DeleteI understand that you might bbe confused about this. I was also confused when my teacher told me to do this.
DeleteMy favorite Japanese singer's name is 秦基博 (Motohiro Hata). He is not much famous, but I think he is the best. My favorite song is called 言の葉 (Kotonoha). If you have a chance, please try it.
Do you have any favorite singer or group?
Yeah. I have heard this songs on my flight back to school from China (I took ANA and transferred in Tokyo, which is awesome!). Is this song the EP or OP of a comic?
DeleteI am quite fond of AKB48. Their producer, 秋元康, is really a god in production. All of the lyrics of the group are written by him. I once wanted to go to 秋葉原 to watch their show, but still did not get a chance to do so.
Kotonoha was an OP of an animation movie called 言の葉の庭（Kotonoha no Niwa）. It was nice one.
DeleteOne time when I went to 秋葉原, I saw the building where AKB48 does the stage. There were many people in a row!
Yeah. This song is really slow and soothing. I already put that in my itunes :)
DeleteBTW, do you watch other comics?
I've read a comic called 弱虫ペダル before. It's a story about bicycles.
DeleteI was surprized it was animated.
That is interesting! BTW, just wondering do most of Japanese people read comic?
Deletelong time no see...sorry for being late. I forgot my account pass...
DeleteI don't know, but I think most people read comics, major ones like One Peice. JUMP is a famous comic magazine in Japan, and most major ones are on this.
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ReplyDeleteBy the way, there was an assignment in the english class where I hade to write my self-promotion to somewhere called Amy's Ice Cream. I heard that the picture of the paper bag is sent. Mine is the one with the scrible in the bag. Teacher said I have to past my promo here, so please commnet something about it. Sorry.
ReplyDeleteHello. I am Atsushi Yoshida. I study management at Ritsumeikan University. I have made this paper bag to express myself. My hobby is to ride my bicycle and watch nature. I experienced many different situations by this. In the bag, I drew a scene I saw before when I was touring, which is the autumn leaves and trees. There is a scene which best fits the season, and I wanted to express that there is something that fits best to me, like the season. When I am hired to your company, I will do my best to help and suggest products to the company by using my experience.
Talking of suggestions, I want to introduce one new idea, which is a new flavor of ice cream. The flavor is called orange osmanthus, or in another name, fragrant orange olive. This flower blooms at autumn, and smells very sweet. Tea leaves are sometimes made by this flower. I believe it will be a great flavor for ice cream, and if there is a chance, please think about creating a new flavor by orange osmanthus.
こんにちは 吉田さん
DeleteSorry for the belated reply. I just got the picture that you made.
I think your promo is good. I think it would be better if you add something more detailed (you can add something more realistic or imaginative here).
Also, some place in your original composition can be improved. I have made some changes and pasted it below.
"Hello. I am Atsushi Yoshida. I study management at Ritsumeikan University. I have made this paper bag to express myself. My hobby is to ride bicycle and watch nature. I experienced many different situations in this way. In the bag, I drew a scene I saw before when I was touring around ...(where), which is autumn leaves and trees. There is a scene which best fits the season, and I want to express there is something that best fits to me, like the season. If I am hired to your company, I will do my best to help and suggest products to the company with my experience.
Talking of suggestions, I want to introduce one new idea, which is a new flavor of ice cream. The flavor is called orange osmanthus, or in another name, fragrant orange olive. This flower blooms at autumn, and smells very sweet. Tea leaves are sometimes made by this flower. I believe it will be a great ice cream flavor, and if there is a chance, please consider creating a new flavor by orange osmanthus."
Thank you for your reply.
DeleteYou know, I'm not so good at english, but I tried hard.
Any way, thank you for the revise!
It is good comparing to some of my friends‘.
Deleteでも 言語について 練習だけ 助けますよね。Hope I am correct to say in this way. But language needs practice a lot and I think you can finally ace it!
頑張る！
ありがとうございます！頑張ります！
DeleteI suppose this will be my last time commenting here. Thanks for replying every time. I hope you will enjoy studying Japanese!
Thank you. And I wish you good luck and have fun during the learning of English.
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